Was this copied off of the TV show? I think it's brilliant. You have a very unique way of drawing, and I think you'll go far if you stick with the techniques you have now. As for Vision, I can see everything very clearly and the artwork is simply entertaining to look at. For impact, I thought this really funny do to the facial expressions and the huge eyes. I like the cartoony feel to it. As for technique, I gave you a full five stars. Like I said before, your style of art is very unique and I feel that you should stick with that style. However, on originality I only gave you two and a half stars simply because you copied this off of a television show, and it didn't come straight from your imagination.
This art is very nice, and I am positive that many others will enjoy it as well.